I have had it edited over by three friends and I was just told that there are still some grammatical errors. Never enough fresh eyes. I am posting it despite my not having time to return and find those errors. I will assure you that Sunlight will be edited by a professional before it is published.
My intention is to offer a taste of it, to hear thoughts regarding flow, if you are attracted to the story at all, or anything else that pops up, even grammatical errors.
Click here to read the first 30 pages.